A powertab I've been messing around with...

[Doof99]

Yo, this is a song I started messing around with a couple days ago in the Powertab Editor, I've saved it as a midi, could some of you guys download it and listen to it and tell me what you think? I was going for something really sad sounding, constructive critiscism is appreciated.
Thanks,
The Doof
http://www.putfile.com/media.php?n=Michaels-Song2

BTW it's not nearly finished...
Thanks again.

[PickChewer]

considering it was a midi and all...i was kinda into that.. That is kind of my style of tune as long as you dont mess it up with vocals from some screamo guy (IMO :p ). i would keep goin with that though... something about it reminds me of older metallica stuff.

[Doof99]

Thanks, I'm like insanely into Metallica, and by the time I finished this I was like "Oh ****!". I can really see their influence in it too. Thanks for the input!
:)

[noobcake]

I liked it, I thought it had a Metallica feel to it aswell. Why not post a sound clip of you playing it?

[Doof99]

Im still down on recording gear, i'm tryin' to get a computer near my guitar stuff, otherwise I would have to lug all of my stuff downstairs. Plus i'm short a guitarist for now. Anyways thanks for the feedback!
Anybody else?
Thanks

[Doof99]

Does anybody else have an opinion of this?
Thanks in advance!
:)

[Yippy.1991]

ya that was awsome, a defiante metallica feel to it :D

[JesterHead1651]

yea metallica poped right into my head