A little thing I made =]

[smfulla]

Ok, this is the only forum I think I could post this in
This is a little something I was working on a while ago
This is the... draft version. I have still yet to complete it, but yeh, give me sum comments. I think its abit out of time, sooo plz excuse that
http://www.soopamaorifulla.f2s.com/files/awesome_as_2.rm

[slaughteredsoul]

WOW...almost perfect, i personally loved it!

[Jameseh]

well, although im not familiar with the song, it sounded really....really really good. well done :p

[smfulla]

lol, its my own stuff, I made it =]
it was for my music composition for my music class =]

[Mason]

What did you use to record it? If ya dont mind me asking :D

[smfulla]

I used Microsoft Sound Recorder. Then I used Real Producer to change the file into real audio.

[slaughteredsoul]

you're really good. is this the whole thing? You should record it again once you master it, i definately wanna hear u play the whole thing.

[smfulla]

thanx alot
umm if I record ALL of it, I'll make sure I post it. It'll be a little while before I do tho... I need to find a drummer and bassist to record sum tracks for me.

[SilverchairRock]

Hey,


Sounds awesome! Which part did you play? The acoustic or electric part. You probally got an pretty high grade on this one :)

[F-art]

Sounds good indeed. very good, especially if you have wrote it yourself. is there any chance btw. to download those programs you used somewhere?

[smfulla]

thanx heaps
umm I played all parts =]
I just recorded another track and mixed it. Btw its not acoustic, its just clean electric =]
I got an alright mark for it... hold on, I'll post the semi proper version (the one I handed in for music) It's not the way I wanted it, so it's only semi proper. But it has the bits I wanted in it. I just have to arrange them.
http://www.soopamaorifulla.f2s.com/files/music_composition2.rm
Btw you can d/l Real Producer from real.com
its shareware I think, or freeware, but in the case of it being shareware, there are only a few things you miss out on and its use is infinate. There is no limits on how long u can use it for or nething.
And I don't know about Sound Recorder. Try Microsoft.com or windows.com

[SilverchairRock]

ooh, you mixed it. That explains the situation :)

How did you record it then?? Just with an microphone or something? Sounds really cool man! Great job....

[fatstrat]

That is really good. How long have you been playing?

[fizz]

This is lovely :D
Constructive critisism.
at about 35 seconds into the song, the solo thing goes a bit.......happy.
i think it would sound better in a minor key.
it could be me.
post the complete thing.
:> its cool man:>

[smfulla]

geez, I can't believe how many responses I got =]
thanx for the constructive criticism
Btw, I'm still not crash hot with scales and how to use them in songs
I can play you all the major and minor scales using 1 basic position =] I need to learn others =] but I'm not to sure how to use them in songs..... so anyway, I just played what I thought sounded pretty good =]

I've been playing for about 4 years
I can't post the complete thing, I need to record it and get a drummer and bassist to record a bass track for me. Btw, anyone think they could record a bass track???? I'm being totally serious.
Like a bass thing to go with the intro. And if you could, could you tab it out. Honestly, that would be tooooooo awesome.

[Death_Hammett]

ur good just like me =P can u give me a tab for it or something?

=)

[fizz]

yea nice one!
tabs please! that would rock :>
why dont you put up a website an put all your songs up there?
if its only the one then put that up, id tell EVERYONE to go there :D

[Schecter_dude]

I could have a go at getting a bass part together for ya... but I don't know if I could record it. I'll have a go, though...

And expanding on the idea of this website... I reckon a bunch of us should get together and do it... posting all of our own tracks. Thoughts?

[Schecter_dude]

PS: It'd be a great help if you could send me the guitar tab for it... dark_angel_mr@hotmail.com

Ta!

[smfulla]

hey that sounds like a great idea!!!!! all of us submitting originals and stuff =]
I just found out that my host (f2s) is shutting down its free hosting..... sooooo there goes my stuff =]
as far as tabs go, I threw up the clean electric part in another thread i think it was in the accoustic forum.
I haven't got the solo tabbed out, I cbf =]